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©2008-2009 ~PhoenixiaRed
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Pardon the lame title.

Story: A secluded, very secluded, village in the remote mountains near the edge of Ancient China. They are a tribe which was cursed once with a terrible life of fear but was blessed by a semi god who fought and restored their peace. A festival was held every once a year for a month to remind themselves of the semi god who once helped them.

PS she is NOT wearing a kimono.

By the way the sky looks empty. Any suggestions?

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:iconkry1:
maybe give a flock of birds on the sky? forming V formation or something..

- also i think the background trees supposedly more desaturated in color.
- the big bowl or something behind her could be more faded so it doesn't look like she's carrying it on her back.
- the guy wearing purple also would be nicer if more faded/desaturated so it doesn't distract the attention for the main girl..

but i like the composition! very nice i think! the mask also look better now :thumbsup:

i dunno if my suggestion would lok good, if not then nevermind it. :XD:

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:iconphoenixiared:
hmm.. ok I'll try your suggestions out and see the effect. Thanks alot K. I really appreciate it! :D

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:iconquiscalus777:
I love the girl's face expression and pose, though I think her legs need a bit more shading/definition. The background is great, too.

Great piece of art! I can't believe it only has one comment. :o

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